I see nothing in your eyes
Except sadness..
Tears driven from hatred
Eyes full of emptiness
I was shot by a broken arrow
From somewhere
Hidden amidst
The serene loneliness of my heart...
Sometimes I wish
That I could be someone else
Someone whom you can pour your heart open
Someone you wont be troubled again and again
But as I stare at you..
I sense a feeling..
A feeling yearning for someone special
Yet so far..
A desire so strong
That even denies the laws of nature
I don't know
If you can still handle
My stupidity and my nonchalant behavior
But all I know
My heart doesn't waver
Only my mind does..
Will you still be willing to accept me?
As I am?
As the person you disgust?
As the guy who betrayed your love?
After all of this..
Will you still be willing?
To be by my side....
Forever?
Time denies my everything
But you don't
Nature banishes me
But you, on the hand
Let me through
Life accepts my death
But you revived me...
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ReplyDeleteThank you Iril and Mia.. Your comment is very much appreciated.. Glad you like my post ^_^
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ReplyDeleteNice blog! who wrote this? it's neat!
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@Coffee Girl.. Thank you.. It's my work actually hehe.. ^_^
ReplyDelete@Princess Kaurvaki.. Thank you so much for your compliment I will visit you in a bit.. ^_^
Hi, Will!
ReplyDeleteIt's really a sad poem, but there is a nostalgic beauty!
Congratulations!
Very nice ... You write very well!
Thank you clark. I'm glad you understood the poem very well. At first glance, it is intended to be an emotional poem but if you dig deeper into it, you will really thought of something different. ^_^. Thank you. I appreciate that.
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